Tuesday, September 26, 2017
Life is a Circus
It had been a long few days. There was still no power anywhere in town. I got up and decided to go for a walk, knowing there was nothing better to do. As soon as I exited The Meridian, I noticed the crowd surrounding the fountain and a circus ringleader standing in the middle speaking loudly. I attempt to look over shoulders to see the animals.As a few minutes pass, the crowd starts to disperse. I walk closer to the fountain and notice a very interesting creature. The first word that came to my mind was a dinosaur. As I approach it, it turns its head and looks at me. The next thing I remember happening, is it starting to peck at me, so I take off running.
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ReplyDelete1.)Phrases, descriptions, imagery that is good.
Buzzing, shimmy
“...played the dangerous game of me closing my eyes for 5 more minutes” (this is so relatable to the audience)
What kind of person do you think this character is? (Personality, physical)
2.)I cannot tell any physical characteristics other than female at this time.
She is probably an adult because she has to go to work, and is someone who sleeps heavily and is not a morning person.
She wears dresses so more feminine than masculine?
What do you want to know more about?
What does she look like?
What kind of a person is she?
What things does she like, dislike, family ties, what does her apartment look like? All these things.
3.) What seems confusing?
There is not enough writing to understand each blog post, like the context of things and such. There just needs to be more sustenance so the audience can actually get into the post and just just be extremely confused.
Objects: A envelop full of glitter, a peach, A yellow notebook
ReplyDeleteAnimals: A baby monkey, A teacup pig, a black widow spider
People: Your mom, Robert Truan, Apollo
Sayings: "You miss 100% of the shots you don't take."
"Watch me whip, now watch me nae nae."